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Wednesday, September 14, 2011

Writer's Corner

How are your personal narratives coming along?
Have you read someone's personal narrative that you really enjoyed? If so, please give a specific compliment!
Did he or she write an awesome hook? What kind was it?
Did he or she write an interesting ending? What kind was it?
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62 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2011 at 3:59 PM

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2011 at 4:15 PM

    I think Ben's book had a good hook at the beginning. WE ZOOMED THROUGH THE FOREST ON THE FOUR WHEELER.

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2011 at 4:32 PM

    My personal narittive is great I am writing about the basketball award I got when i got to got to the reliant stadium!

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2011 at 4:34 PM

    I really like Harrison's book about drawing it told me so much about how to draw different things

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  5. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2011 at 4:49 PM

    My new personal narrative MANHUNT part 1 and 2 is coming along really good
    But now I'm in the publishing sequence the hardest part !

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  6. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2011 at 5:06 PM

    My personal narrative is going great i like it and i really like Harrison's book about drawing it told me so much about how to draw and i also like Margaix's
    she had awesome hook. Ben's hook I liked too WE ZOOMED THROUGH THE FOREST ON THE FOUR WHEELER.And Alice had one about her dog Alice, awesome hook.

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  7. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2011 at 5:23 PM

    My personal narrative is coming along great! I did read Carter's book and I thought it was really good. I also like Harrison's how to draw book.

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  8. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2011 at 5:51 PM

    My pesonnal narritive is going really good. I'm writing about the time I went to Colordo Bend. Right now I'm publishing.

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  9. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2011 at 5:51 PM

    I read Antony's book the accident to remember and it was a very cool book
    I can't belive the police came and helped him up do you think it will ever happen again?

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  10. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2011 at 5:58 PM

    My personal naritive was about me going on my dad and I's first hunt my dad missed it and I was SO mad at him! I can't wait to publish my new book SUPRISE PARTY I hope you all like it please read my new book HUNTING DEER by Lila Griggs.

    :)

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  11. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2011 at 6:01 PM

    Ben's hook was great it was very describing can't wait till he writes a new book :)

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  12. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2011 at 6:03 PM

    can someone please comment on my new book Hunting Deer :)

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  13. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2011 at 6:19 PM

    I also really liked Ben's hook WE ZOOMED THROUGH THE FOREST ON THE FOUR WHEELER. It was very describing and movie in your mind.

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  14. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2011 at 6:21 PM

    I haven't read Lila's book yet but I can tell it's going to be good

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  15. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2011 at 6:25 PM

    I forgot a few of the baseball card adventures by Dan Gutman but here's a
    list of all of them .1 Honus & Me
    1.2 Jackie & Me
    1.3 Babe & Me
    1.4 Shoeless Joe & Me
    1.5 Mickey & Me
    1.6 Abner & Me
    1.7 Satch & Me
    1.8 Jim & Me
    1.9 Ray & Me
    coming soon Ted and me !!!!

    Bibliography wikipedia for list

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  16. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2011 at 6:56 PM

    I like the beginning hook in my story. But I didn't make by myself I did with a small group. Which made me think of the hook.

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  17. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2011 at 7:36 PM

    i read Antony's book the accident remember too lila and it is really good and the police came my so cool

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  18. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2011 at 7:40 PM

    I like Harrison's how to draw book too! I like the fish in the book.

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  19. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2011 at 7:43 PM

    lila your book sounds so good, i can't wait till i read it.i really want to read it and i know a little cause you told me some of the book and the part you read to me was really good and i can picture the part you told me in my mind and so i know the rest is so good and your dad MISSED the deer!!!!!!!! oh my gosh

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  20. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2011 at 9:19 PM

    My story is coming along great! Can't wait to publish. And Ben like the hook!

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  21. AnonymousSeptember 15, 2011 at 8:22 AM

    I like all the books there all so good

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  22. AnonymousSeptember 15, 2011 at 2:27 PM

    I can't wait till Ben's book is finished!
    & Kristen's book sounds good too!!!!
    mine is like endless!!! I keep getting new ideas!
    Especially for another book. I also can help anyone
    who is stuck. Cause I think I found a new strategy!!!

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  23. AnonymousSeptember 15, 2011 at 6:44 PM

    Anthonys book was great

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  24. AnonymousSeptember 15, 2011 at 6:46 PM

    cant wate to finsh

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  25. AnonymousSeptember 16, 2011 at 8:23 AM

    I can not wait to read Bradyns book, "The Time I Swam With Dolphins" it sounds so good! How do you like my new book? Has anybody read it? I hope so.
    :)

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  26. AnonymousSeptember 16, 2011 at 8:24 AM

    I LOVE THE BLOG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  27. AnonymousSeptember 16, 2011 at 6:11 PM

    Bradyn I can't wait to read your book, like Lila said. Same with Ben the hook makes me interested!

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  28. AnonymousSeptember 16, 2011 at 6:18 PM

    Lila I think your book is awesome! I read it yesterday it's so good! And at the end a little funny! Great ,awesome book!

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  29. AnonymousSeptember 17, 2011 at 10:31 AM

    Thank you Kristen and Skyler for reading my book I'm glad you like it!
    I hope you read my next book that I am working on!

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  30. AnonymousSeptember 17, 2011 at 10:36 AM

    I really can't wait to read Bradyn's book, The Time I Swam With Dolphins it sounds like a really good book!

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  31. AnonymousSeptember 17, 2011 at 11:52 AM

    hi mine is coming along great and i love everyones and I really love the time i swam with the dolphins

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  32. AnonymousSeptember 17, 2011 at 11:57 AM

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  33. AnonymousSeptember 17, 2011 at 12:02 PM

    I love Zoe's about when she got her ears pierced the germ glittering in my ear LOVE IT

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  34. AnonymousSeptember 17, 2011 at 12:34 PM

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  35. AnonymousSeptember 17, 2011 at 12:36 PM

    is anyone else commenting but me

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  36. AnonymousSeptember 17, 2011 at 1:58 PM

    I think Zoe's book about getting her ears pierced was really good. I Love the part when she said the earings GLISTENED in my ears.

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  37. AnonymousSeptember 18, 2011 at 1:01 PM

    Britney don't you love Zoe's book and the part whens he said the earings GLISTENED in her ears. The book is awesome I LOVE IT great book Zoe. GOOD JOB

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  38. AnonymousSeptember 18, 2011 at 1:08 PM

    My personal naritive is coming along great! I am so going to read Zoe's new book when I get to school tommorrow! it sounds great I have seen Skyler comment on the blog about it!

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  39. AnonymousSeptember 21, 2011 at 8:14 AM

    Has anybody had a time when they're writing and they stop and think ahead of their writing instead of doing it? It happens to me all the time & it slows me down, and sometimes makes my story longer!

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  40. AnonymousSeptember 21, 2011 at 8:15 AM

    Yeah Lila, Zoe's book is good, I can't wait till you read it. I can chat with you when your done and we can talk about it and share what we liked about the book

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  41. AnonymousSeptember 21, 2011 at 8:18 AM

    Hey Anthony? Do you mind if I put you in my book?

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  42. AnonymousSeptember 21, 2011 at 5:54 PM

    Skyler, thank you for the compliment about my story. I cannot wait to read your book.

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  43. AnonymousSeptember 22, 2011 at 1:12 PM

    I've got to my favorite part. It's where you meet the white eyed ghost

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  44. AnonymousSeptember 22, 2011 at 1:23 PM

    Skyler can't wait to finish our book. DDA.

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  45. AnonymousSeptember 22, 2011 at 1:37 PM

    I read Bradyn's book it is so good!

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  46. AnonymousSeptember 22, 2011 at 1:38 PM

    I love Zoe's book: pierced. I love the part where she said: the turquiose gems glistened in my ears.

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  47. AnonymousSeptember 22, 2011 at 1:42 PM

    I love kristen's book: snorkling in the bermuda sea. It is totally awsome!

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  48. AnonymousSeptember 26, 2011 at 4:03 PM

    I just puplished my brand new book, Suprise Party the cover of it looks so cool! I also read Kristen's new book Snorkling in The Bermuda Sea it is so cool does she know what kinds of fish she saw? Did she see a clown fish like in the movie, Finding Nemo or a fish like the charecter Dori? Did she see a puffer fish when she was snorkling? I wonder if she saw any dolphins or sharks maby if she did see one it would be a, great white or a tiger shark I have so many questions about the book that she wrote but I might as well save them to tell Kristen myserlf but I just want to ask one more question about the book that she wrote...............Was there any good resturants in Bermuda?

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  49. AnonymousSeptember 26, 2011 at 4:09 PM

    I was peeking at the end of the day at Skyler's cover about her new book,
    Bees Everywhere it looks so cool I wonder how good her book is going to
    be when it is puplished and in those things that Ms. Papadakes puts on the books when they are done I have no idea what they are called but I still can't wait!

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  50. AnonymousSeptember 26, 2011 at 4:12 PM

    If the 5th grade kids were still on this blog I would comment on their book Dear future third graders I would.

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  51. AnonymousSeptember 27, 2011 at 7:07 AM

    I read Bradyn's new book a while ago and I was wondering if I could know where she was when she was petting the dolphins and also did the dolphins ever be mean or did they ever be grouchy and not let you get on their back?
    I hope that Bradyn can tell me herslf or on the blog her book is really good can't wait to read another!

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  52. AnonymousSeptember 27, 2011 at 2:59 PM

    Hey Lila! Your book is awesome! I read it a couple of weeks ago. And I LOVE it because it is so cool!

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  53. AnonymousSeptember 27, 2011 at 3:00 PM

    I'm writing a free writing book called trapped about a boy who is suffering of amnesia and doesn't know where or who he is and where he is is a very strange place

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  54. AnonymousSeptember 27, 2011 at 3:04 PM

    I can't wait to read Margaux's book Snake. It looks SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hey Margaux, is your book done yet?

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  55. AnonymousSeptember 27, 2011 at 3:05 PM

    I'm writing a new book called Orange Potter and the Deathly Apple to give you a feeling... to orange he likes to fool around and play. You might be familiar with his videos!

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  56. AnonymousSeptember 28, 2011 at 8:25 AM

    I love writing! I also just made and published my new book poetry it is dedicated to Ms. Papadakes i've got poems about dogs, snakes, animals, people, and night time. I can't wait to make a new book! :)

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  57. AnonymousSeptember 29, 2011 at 4:17 PM

    Did Hudson read my book yet or not? I hope he did. ???????????????????

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  58. AnonymousOctober 4, 2011 at 8:01 AM

    The question is did someone read my book yet?

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  59. AnonymousOctober 20, 2011 at 2:48 PM

    Hey, Alice LOVE the book " Doors Locked Gus?" I just LOVE LOVE LOVE the book! I LOVED your words such as " Sweat glistening on my forehead."

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  60. AnonymousOctober 20, 2011 at 2:52 PM

    Did anybody read my book yet?

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  61. AnonymousOctober 20, 2011 at 2:56 PM

    Good job Ethan!

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  62. AnonymousOctober 26, 2011 at 10:42 AM

    I am writing a new story called The Black Hole

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