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Wednesday, December 19, 2012
Fiction Feedback!
We have published some wonderful fiction stories. Please give a specific compliment to one of your classmates about his or her story. Also, you may share your favorite part of your own story.
Please share any memorable lines from these stories!
I liked all of the fiction books our class wrote but i'm only going to share two that I really liked starting with Sara's story I loved the pop art and it was funny when Ava's sister,lilly was scared of the sugar ant on her. Another story I really loved was Mary Eloise's book I liked all the characters and I liked the main Idea I am really into Vacation books! those were the stories that I really enjoyed reading.
I like many storys but I'm only going to share one that I liked. I liked in Evan's story how even though he is in a wheel chair he still plays basketball.
Out of all I have got to say I enjoyed Jackson's. How they locked the mom in a closet. Also have to say some stuff about mine. My favorite part (Because I know you were all wondering) is when Seth (The main character) gets the gold medal while Tom (The bully) still thinks about the game they played.
My book is about this boy named David he gets deteniton for getting a 17 on his test, screaming in class, and forgetting his homework seven times in a row. When he goes to detention he likes it because he gets to do easy papers and if they are right he gets a treat. His fith day he didn't like it because Mr. Bull was the teacher and he got really really mad. After he got mad it taught David to be good.
I just finished a book called Ava and Mrs. Fancy Pants about two days ago. I did many different kinds of pop ups in it. I HOPE EVERYONE LIKES MY NEW BOOK!
I love Dylan's book, Because it makes me feel like oh my gosh! Will she find her mom although I love your illustrations, Especially on the last page. And her is one thing I like about my story my illustrations! especially on the airport on fire thing. Now that I think about it I like a lot of peoples illustrations.
I liked Alexandra's C book because it had a lot of memorable lines in it. For example when it said right when they got there they knew their life was over. I also liked the pictures a lot. Your book was funny and so are you. My favorite part about my book is when Ann walked all the way from France to Houston and when she finally reached the house it was the wrong house. If you want to find out what happens next you can read my book. It is called The Search. I hope you enjoy my book if anyone reads it.
I really liked evrybodys but some parts stood out. In Jackson's I like the part where the snake bit Rodger since it was his birthday. In Douglas's I like the part where he switched teachers to get David annoyed. In Cade's when Kee Smith broke his arm at the end. I really like Ali's hook. In Blake's when they get in a fight. And I loved the illustrations. Espespecially Henry's. I LOVE all of Evan's books, I can't wait until Evans new book The Book is finshed, I call reading it first. Like I said I do like evrybodys.
I liked all of the fiction books our class wrote but i'm only going to share two that I really liked starting with Sara's story I loved the pop art and it was funny when Ava's sister,lilly was scared of the sugar ant on her. Another story I really loved was Mary Eloise's book I liked all the characters and I liked the main Idea I am really into Vacation books!
ReplyDeletethose were the stories that I really enjoyed reading.
Thank's Ava, I love your picture's to.
DeleteThank you Ava. I haven't read anyones yet sense I have been working on mine but tomorrow I will read yours.
DeleteP.S I BET IT WILL BE GREAT!
I agree ava
DeleteI like many storys but I'm only going to share one that I liked. I liked in Evan's story how even though he is in a wheel chair he still plays basketball.
ReplyDeleteThanks your story as I mentioned in my comment is great too.
DeleteI love Sara's, it's so funny. Like when the little sister is scared of a sugar ant.
ReplyDeleteI am so glad you enjoyed my book! Tomorrow I will read yours and Ava's.
DeleteOut of all I have got to say I enjoyed Jackson's. How they locked the mom in a closet. Also have to say some stuff about mine. My favorite part (Because I know you were all wondering) is when Seth (The main character) gets the gold medal while Tom (The bully) still thinks about the game they played.
ReplyDeleteMy book is about this boy named David he gets deteniton for getting a 17 on his test, screaming in class, and forgetting his homework seven times in a row. When he goes to detention he likes it because he gets to do easy papers and if they are right he gets a treat. His fith day he didn't like it because Mr. Bull was the teacher and he got really really mad. After he got mad it taught David to be good.
ReplyDeleteThat sounds like a good story.
DeleteI just finished a book called Ava and Mrs. Fancy Pants about two days ago. I did many different kinds of pop ups in it. I HOPE EVERYONE LIKES MY NEW BOOK!
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to read your book, Sara.
DeleteI like it.
DeleteI really cant decide i love all of them but I have to say I REALLY LIKE EVENS! But I really like all of them.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite of my fiction story is when I wake up and find out my dog is missing right after my hamster was missing.
ReplyDeleteI really liked Sara's persnol narrative Christmas Clues.
ReplyDeleteI really liked cade's persnol narratives becouse i go hunting too.
ReplyDeleteI love Dylan's book, Because it makes me feel like oh my gosh! Will she find her mom although I love your illustrations, Especially on the last page. And her is one thing I like about my story my illustrations! especially on the airport on fire thing. Now that I think about it I like a lot of peoples illustrations.
ReplyDeleteI liked Alexandra's C book because it had a lot of memorable lines in it. For example when it said right when they got there they knew their life was over. I also liked the pictures a lot. Your book was funny and so are you. My favorite part about my book is when Ann walked all the way from France to Houston and when she finally reached the house it was the wrong house. If you want to find out what happens next you can read my book. It is called The Search. I hope you enjoy my book if anyone reads it.
ReplyDeleteI really liked evrybodys but some parts stood out. In Jackson's I like the part where the snake bit Rodger since it was his birthday. In Douglas's I like the part where he switched teachers to get David annoyed. In Cade's when Kee Smith broke his arm at the end. I really like Ali's hook. In Blake's when they get in a fight. And I loved the illustrations. Espespecially Henry's. I LOVE all of Evan's books, I can't wait until Evans new book The Book is finshed, I call reading it first. Like I said I do like evrybodys.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the pop up art in Sara's book.I got inspired by her book for mine my book is called the play. I hope you read it !!!
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