I like my story hook. It was July 31 and I was getting ready for my dad's election party! This is an example of a cut to action story hook.
That seems really cool I will want to read it when it is published!!!
Awesome Carolyn can I read your book to?
This is my story hook.Welcome! to Hawaii I heard a voice and that is an example of a dialog story hook.
alexandra do you know where to get more animals
I have no idea
Was it nice in hawaii
Yes it was Ava.
I like my story hook. It is a setting hook. It goes like this: It was a bright sunny day when mom told me my brother named Carter and I had to stay at my grandmas house.
good ava
mistake
I like my story. Pico got hit by a car crash.
are you sad
Is his leg still hurt : c
this is my hook i could hear cloud and sky chirping
I cant wait till my book gets published! It's called FLAG HOLDING. It's about the time I held the at the Texans vs 49ers game.
ok
I will tell you about a memorable line from my story. It was a cold morning. The sky was still dark when we pulled out of the driveway.
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Cool Ava when is your little sister's BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!? Mary Eloise!
It's on January 30th
I like my hook because it`s Macro-Micro it was March 14,2012
Tears flouded down my face
Mine is a cut to action. I peddled god speed.
sounds good can I read it when your done
Thanks, maybe I can read yours soon.
So click on your icon and click edit and choose file.
then you press save profile
Ok i got it.
My hook is... It was a dark cold night and silent through out the house.
That really makes me want to read your book.
Dan walked down the hallway. He was ten and knew there was no such thing as a ghost...-the white eyed ghost
Thank you so much, Harrison! You really inspire us to be better writers!
I like my story hook. It was July 31 and I was getting ready for my dad's election party! This is an example of a cut to action story hook.
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DeleteAwesome Carolyn can I read your book to?
DeleteThis is my story hook.Welcome! to Hawaii I heard a voice and that is an example of a dialog story hook.
ReplyDeletealexandra do you know where to get more animals
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DeleteWas it nice in hawaii
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ReplyDeleteI cant wait till my book gets published! It's called FLAG HOLDING. It's about the time I held the at the Texans vs 49ers game.
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ReplyDeleteI like my hook because it`s Macro-Micro it was March 14,2012
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ReplyDeleteSo click on your icon and click edit and choose file.
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ReplyDeleteMy hook is... It was a dark cold night and silent through out the house.
ReplyDeleteThat really makes me want to read your book.
DeleteDan walked down the hallway. He was ten and knew there was no such thing as a ghost...
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Thank you so much, Harrison! You really inspire us to be better writers!
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